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-The Pool engine. Hop in, the water is warm.
+_Pool. Hop in, the water's warm._
 
-Pool is a lightweight web-based networked rendering and physics engine designed to push the boundaries of what defines a
-modern engine.
+Pool is a lightweight web-enabled multipurpose engine for UI apps and multiplayer games with physics designed to push the boundaries of what defines a contemporary user experience.
 
-Pool was inspired by the Roblox game engine and features its own scripting language. Global fluid, cloth, soft and rigid
-body physics are intended to be implemented in the near future.
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+Taking inspiration from the Roblox game engine, Pool ships with its own scripting language, Mars, and shares a similar instance-service model. 
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+Global fluid, cloth, soft and rigid
+body physics and declarative UI are some of the goal features intended to be implemented in the near future.
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